Еще пример эссе из экзамена TOEFL

Некоторое время назад я приводила здесь несколько примеров эссе из экзамена TOEFL, написанных мотми учениками. Данные работы кажутся мне достойными Вашего внимания. Здесь я привожу еще один пример такой письменной работы.

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
Nowadays, many people try to buy or rent a house in the countryside if they have children. They believe that it’s better for children to grow up there than in a big city. Actually, if you live in a big city you come across many problems growing up kids. One of them is health.
Commonly cities are much more polluted while in the countryside the air is clean. Many chronicle illness are caused by bad ecology.
Another problem is space. Usually there is not enough space to play outdoors in big towns. So kids have to be indoors. But if you live in the countryside you can spend much more time outdoors.
Some parents are afraid of bad people who can hurt a child and this fear is more reasonable in big cities.
Children like to see and caress animals living in the countryside. People living there venture to have more domestic animals than townspeople. It is a well-known fact that communication with other kids and animals is useful for a growing person.
When I was a child I liked to live in the country in summer. Not only because it was my school vacation, I liked it because there I had a lot of fun. There were many other kids and we played together all day long. We made a shelter of branches, swam in the lake, went for a walk
in the forest and did many other exciting things which are impossible do in the city.
I think now most of city advantages for kids are decreasing thanks to technical progress. You can live anywhere you like without the feeling of being isolated from civilization. So if you have a child and have the opportunity to live in the countryside you should do it.

Данное эссе отвечает всем требованиям экзаменам. Оно четко структурировано. Точка зрения автора подкреплена соответствующими аргументами. Объем работы соответствует стандарту.
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